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Hawaii isn't a " paradise" or a perfect place to live, there are many issues and flaws. One of these issues is homelessness. Homelessness is a government issue, buisness issue, public health issue, public safety issue, civil-liberties issue, and a social-justice issue. The big problems about homelessness is the large homeless population, camping in many places, and the high cost of living. Hawaii isn't just a vacation spot for tourists but also to homeless people that make it a problem in Hawaii. The homeless population is increasing more and more. The number of homeless in Hawaii increased 61% since 2000 and soon the numbers may increase. Rather then avoiding this issue we should come up with more solutions such as helping them get jobs and make money to get them back on there feet. Currently, more than 6000 people live on the streets in the entire U.S. Living on the streets where rape, robbery and horrible weather happens is a big threat to homeless people. Living on the streets can be a very terrifying feeling with barely having any food,and all the assaults and tragedys toward the homeless people. The more we help and take out of the streets is the less injuries and illness we have to risk for our people.
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